hay errores ,si me pueden ayudar a corregir not enough is being done to protect endangered animals .do you agree? titulo 1)which animals are under threat 2) why we need to protect these animals 3)....your own idea Many species in our world today are becoming endangered due to loss of their habitat ,human activities ,pollution and global warming .however most people instead of doing something to protect endangered animals,as opposed to this,they are causing destruction in them. For these reasons animals as polar bear ,orangutan,snow leopard ,whale and others are disappearing from the world and in the future they will only be seen in pictures and videos. Artic animals,such as polar bears,are in danger of extinction due to global warming .Other species ,for example ,snow leopard,is being threatened because they are hunted or also due some old traditions give parts of animals miraculous properties.In addition to this,deforestation,sea pollution it is afecting to species like birds,and whale respectively. If we let these beautifull creatures dissappear,our world will never be the same.Think of a forest without any birds singing or an ocean with no whales.Furthermore,when sppecies die out,the whole,balance of nature is threatened and in the end it will effect us all. In my opinion is necessary that governments approve additional environmental laws so that the pollution of the factories can be better controlled .Moreover ,people should take awareness to protect and preserv the environmment. To sump up,there is no doubt that more could be done to save endangered species.It is worth saving them so that future generations can admire them.
x eso ya hice ,solo quiero que si pueden chequear y ayudarme a dar cuenta de algun error,aparenteente no veo errores ,pero siempre termino teniendo errores
esta horrible avanzado ...buuu ..puedes chequear porfavor y decirme si vez algun error,segun io esta bien ,pero nose ya esta ,ose es el tema y las preguntads,ya lo hice segun eso,ahora solo deseo que me corrigan porfas
Buen, sólo te diré que si veo errores, falta de comas y otras cosas tb. Como tarea te dejo que lo revises de nuevo.
weaadasss. al final cuando hablas con cualquiero americano ves harto mote y errores gramaticales, incluso en su escritura.. Pero bueno, para pasar el curso si tienes que hacerlo bien. solo allí.
Are you agree? en vez de today usa nowadays. La conclusión no es muy buena que digamos..... To save spices only to be admired ????????? Tienes que adicionar por el equilibrio del sistema que lo dices mas arriba.
